Comments on: GREENER GRASS – Excerpt

By: Verbal Vixen (T Caldwell)

Verbal Vixen (T Caldwell) — Sun, 09 Mar 2008 14:21:00 +0000

Thank you kindly MsPuddin’.

Yeah, I think a lot of women would be able to relate to this novel. I also play on the alternate perspective of this in the in the book, by pointing out that the main female character does very little to vocalize her wants and needs to her husband yet expects him to just “figure it out” that she is unsatisfied. I wanted men to be able to relate to this story as well, as there is something I am trying to point out to both genders.

By: MsPuddin

MsPuddin — Fri, 07 Mar 2008 21:57:00 +0000

great exert. I loved how the reader got to step into her mind. And while she is going through so much her husband is completely oblivious is something a lot of women can related to.

I need some writing tips woman!

By: Verbal Vixen (T Caldwell)

Verbal Vixen (T Caldwell) — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 04:29:00 +0000

Thanks Torrance – I can’t tell you how much I appreciate the feedback.

Queencaty – heh, no wonder you split! It is cool to hear that you can relate to that story.